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myngoc
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ID 15610
Date: 07/09/2007
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letter 2
dear Mr.Terry:
I think i am the right person for the job because i have the right qualifications,and they gave me a promotion because they like my work.also i have the right experience.the advertisement was is the honolulu star bulletin of july 1,1990.I think you should consider my application seriously.i have a high school diplama and i have studied textiles.my degree in textiles is from manoa polytechnic institute.at shool i got good grades in math,physics,and chemistry . i got my degree in 1979.Your advertisement was for a prodution manager.then i studied other subjects related to the textile industry.I was given a promotion, and i have been Assistant production managar since q\1982.I like my work vwry much,and i have a graduate degree in Industrail and labor relations from the university of hawaii.that was in 1984.was born in San francisco,and i am bilingual in chinese and english.i have worked for the topp clothing Company sine 1979.I am prepared to work hard,and I am sure that my present employer would give me an excellent reference.I visited relatives in Indonesia in 1979 and like Indonesia very much
Sincerely yours
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Reply:
thuyanhgov
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REF: 94388
Date: 07/09/2007
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Mình sắp xếp lại và lượt bỏ những nội dung ko phù hợp với 1 lá thư có nội dung xin việc. Dưới đây là ý kiến của mình
Dear Mr. Terry:
I venture to sent this letter to you concerning about the new job which you posted in the announcement on July 1, 1990. My name is My Ngoc. I was born in Sanfancisco. I am Chinese American. I think that my qualification and my experience will meet your needs. Actually, my current job is good. The company grant me a promotion because they have learned that I've always tried my best in all my assignments. I'm strongly interested in this job and I'm very delighted if you would save a few minute to consider my application. I have worked for the Topp clothing company sine 1979. I have had an experience as an Assistant to Manager since 1982. I graduated from High School in 1979. During the school time, I always got a good grades at math, physics and chemistry and I got a Degree from Manoa polytechnic Institute. Then, I graduated from the university of Hawaii major in industrail and labor relations in 1984.
Feel free contact me if you want to get further information. I'm willing to give you a reference from my curent supervisor if you required.
Sincerely Yours.
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Reply:
binhthuong
member
REF: 94390
Date: 07/10/2007
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Bạn bấm vào đây để tham khảo bài văn mẩu
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Reply:
namthao
member
REF: 94397
Date: 07/10/2007
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Hi My Ngoc,
Trong tin thấn tương trợ với nhau, mình come up one more option để My ngoc có sự lựa chọn. Chúc My Ngoc May Mắn
From: My Ngoc
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TO: Mr. Jerry (Whom It may concern)
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Reference: for the position (manager) in the Honolulu Star Bulletin, July 1,1990
Dear Mr. Jerry,
I would like to take an opportunity to challenge for the position (manager) where experience and education are valuable. I strongly believe I am a person you are looking for. First, I have strong experience and I am a hard worker. I have worked for Topp Clongthing Company since 1979, and I got a promotion an assistant Production manager 1982. In my duty, I take assignments and projects from my manager or company, then I organize and help employees to perform those assignments on time. I also come up with new ideas that cooperate with the company’s plan for high production, but less labor. Besides, I have solved problems between employees in purse pose good relations in working and environment. In addition, I can speak and write in English, Vietnamese, and Chinese, so I am very confident when living in abroad. Once, in 1979, I visited my relatives Indonesia where I was interested in. Besides, my experience, I got degree in The University of Hawaii, major in Industrial and Labors in 1984, and Manoa Polytechnic Institute in 1979 with major in Textiles.
Again, I have an extreme experience and degree in education. I am also a hard worker who usually come up with new ideas for high production, but less labor. I am a responsible person, and well organization, and I usually perform assignments on time. With all that, I encourage myself to apply for a job and I also believe I am a person you are looking for.
My references are available upon request. Thank you for reading my letter, and I am looking forward to hear from you.
Sincerely,
Nam Thao
Summer 2007
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Reply:
myngoc
member
REF: 94499
Date: 07/13/2007
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Cảm ơn các bạn,nhờ các bạn giúp mình đã hiểu được bài nay rồi.thank you very much
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