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Forum > Nhật ký tiếng Anh >> Share with you !!!!!!!! HOT TOPIC !!!!!!!! REPLY HERE !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

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 Post by: jamesngo
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 ID 16999
 Date: 05/25/2008


Share with you !!!!!!!! HOT TOPIC !!!!!!!! REPLY HERE !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
profile - trang ca nhan  posts - bai da dang    edit -sua doi, thay doi  post reply - goy y kien
Mình từ lâu đã là thành viên của web site này. Lâu lắm goài mới vào lại,nay trình Anh văn có improved đc chút đỉnh,viết vài dòng múa rìu qua mắt thợ,mong các bạn ủng hộ và reply nhiều nhiều:
IT'S ENOUGH TO DREAM! YOU'RE NOT THE BEST !
At first,I'd like to tell you a true story about myself . When I'm in year school,my parents told me 'bout their plan to get me go study abroad. When I heard it,I was very excited and cheery. I still bring those feelings until now and each time I think to the day when I go to the airport, I'm in a exciting,interesting mood. Going abroad for any way, with me always is a adventurous trip and always appeals me strongly. I'd want to get there to have many experience that I haven't got it before. It's an oppornity which occured to me especially . I know, experience with everyone in us is very important,useful and really help us so much in looking for a good job later. But still have many things make me to be worried. The most important is: studying. I asked myself if I could overcome tests in class and if I could understand all things teachers say. If I can't, it means my studying just is a trip for anything, not almost for studying. I also read many topics on websites about the difficulties that foreign-study (international students) can match in the time they study abroad. The advertisement of many companies about the country which we'll come, it's not true. I told to myself, when I come there, have many things different with things I imagine now. It's also is a useful thinking,useful preparing for me,not to be shocked in first days live in another country,
Mời các anh chị sửa giùm em. Nếu em viết bài luận của mình như thế này đây thì anh chị nhận xét giúp em là em đang ở trong cấp độ anh văn nào?
Em đang học GE 400 ở anh văn Việt mỹ . Mời anh chị đóng góp giùm ý kiến!


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 Reply: zznobitazz
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 REF: 98734
 Date: 08/04/2008


  profile - trang ca nhan  posts - bai da dang  edit - sua bai, thay doi   post reply - goy y kien, dang bai
it's lucky for you. There are a lot of person want to oversea but they can't, so do I. I wish I could abroad to see the life style and foreign country. But I think it's so long time I can do my dream. Oh, are you the boy or girl ? If a girl I think you're a strong and optimistic person. A good future will come with you. Try to best win and being successful for you
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NoBiTa


 
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