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Forum > Nhật ký tiếng Anh >> what's LOVE!!!!!!!!!!!!!

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 Post by: asokani
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 ID 16676
 Date: 01/09/2008


what's LOVE!!!!!!!!!!!!!
profile - trang ca nhan  posts - bai da dang    edit -sua doi, thay doi  post reply - goy y kien
True love is when u shed a tear and still want him.It's when he ignores you and you still love him. It's when he loves another but you still smile and say that "I'm happy for you".When all you really do is cry ...and cry.

honey, no one understand why I LOVE YOU, but God know that i love you from the bottom of my heart. Last night, i cant sleep honey! coz my pillow is too wet.I close my eyes and all i see is you.


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 Reply: ttran
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 REF: 97695
 Date: 01/09/2008


  profile - trang ca nhan  posts - bai da dang  edit - sua bai, thay doi   post reply - goy y kien, dang bai
Hello Asokani,

What is love?
Here is an answer;
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I love you...

you love me...

So, go to bed and make babies...!

TTran.

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 Reply: asokani
 member
 REF: 97696
 Date: 01/09/2008


  profile - trang ca nhan  posts - bai da dang  edit - sua bai, thay doi   post reply - goy y kien, dang bai
no word for you!!

 
 Reply: sinnombre
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 REF: 97698
 Date: 01/10/2008


  profile - trang ca nhan  posts - bai da dang  edit - sua bai, thay doi   post reply - goy y kien, dang bai
Dear Asokani,

Hello Asokani! How are you feeling today?

Asokani, I've read all of your posts, and I am very impressed with your ability to express yourself in English.

I've got a question for you though. Are all the "love stories" that you posted here your personal true stories that you are going through right now or they are just "make-believe" stories that you have "cooked up" to post here in hope to strike a conversation, make friends, and to learn English at the same time?

Well! If you truly like to make friends, please rest assured that you have got a friend in me here. I absolutely can help you with your English, and we can talk about anything, and I mean anything at all. However, I can't talk much untill I know your intention. Till then eh!

My best wishes to you dear!


 
 Reply: asokani
 member
 REF: 97712
 Date: 01/12/2008


  profile - trang ca nhan  posts - bai da dang  edit - sua bai, thay doi   post reply - goy y kien, dang bai
OH MY GOD...
hv sthing wrong,, i reply for u very long.. but its no appear. i wanna be crazy, oh God.

i cant repeat what i wrote for u coz i hv to go now, i'll do it tomorrow ok, hope u unerstand me.
nice to meet you, i like the way u talk to me.hope we will good friend. u can call me Kim.
see u late, hv lovely day.


 
 Reply: sinnombre
 member
 REF: 97718
 Date: 01/12/2008


  profile - trang ca nhan  posts - bai da dang  edit - sua bai, thay doi   post reply - goy y kien, dang bai
Dear Akosani,

Yes, I do understand you. And yes, we can be good friends, my dear.

Kim! Please copy what you have written before you click "Post A topic/Goi Di" so that in case what you have written is gone, and you are asked to log in again you still have a copy of what you wrote and that you can re-post by "Pasting" it.

I am looking forward to hearing from you dear.

By the way, I am so pleased to have made your acquaintance dear!

You have a nice day!

I'll catch you later eh!


 
 Reply: asokani
 member
 REF: 97719
 Date: 01/12/2008


  profile - trang ca nhan  posts - bai da dang  edit - sua bai, thay doi   post reply - goy y kien, dang bai
Good morning Sinnombre!!
its 9am.. just wake up coz last night i go to bed too late (4am), and the first thing i do its turn on my computer to listen to music n read ur reply. well, really im feel happy.
How are you today?? hope every thing is good.how long u study E?? i hd study E when im in high school but i cant write or speak what i think, and i just study it for 5months by my self. i can speak well. but to wrte a grammatical sentence its my problem coz my skill writing very bad. i know i hv many mistake in here but actually i try my best to let u know what im thinking.
im very happy coz u said "i absolutely can help you with your English" i'll try to company ok.
can u tell me some thing about u??


 
 Reply: sinnombre
 member
 REF: 97725
 Date: 01/13/2008


  profile - trang ca nhan  posts - bai da dang  edit - sua bai, thay doi   post reply - goy y kien, dang bai
Dear Asokani,

It's so nice to know that you turned on your computer first thing in the morning to look for my message. I am so flattered and appreciative. Thank you so much, my dear, for making me feel so needed & wanted.

My dear, I am sorry! I wish I could write a lot, but I can't because I am at work right now. I will try to help you with your English, and I will write a little more next time eh.

Your English is quite good. Your writing skill will improve tremendously if you just remember that the past WENT with the past, the present GOES with the present, and the future WILL GO with the future.

For example:

What you wrote the other day:

honey, no one understand why I LOVE YOU, but God know that i love you from the bottom of my heart. Last night, i cant sleep honey! coz my pillow is too wet.I close my eyes and all i see is you.

Should be:

Honey, no one understands why I LOVE YOU, but God knows that I love you from the bottom of my heart. Last night, I couldn't sleep honey! 'Cause my pillow was too wet with my tears. I closed my eyes and all I saw was you.

Your writing skill will be better if you write your complete thoughts in complete sentences, try not to use "active voice" unless you really have to, and make very sure that the past WENT with the past.

Asokani dear, there is not much to say about an uneducated, unskilled laborer like me :). Can you introduce yourself first and I will tell you what you like to know about me after :-) ?

Anyway, see if you like these songs huh? These two songs are the same song that performed by two different singers, one with a French version and the other with an English version.





Les Feuilles mortes


Oh! Je voudrais tant que tu te souviennes
des jours heureux où nour étions amis
En ce temps-là la vie était plus belle
et le soleil plus brûlant qu'aujourd'hui
Les feuilles mortes se ramassent à la pelle...
Tu vois je n'ai pas oublié
Les feuilles mortes se ramassent à la pelle
les souvenirs et les regrets aussi
et le vent du nord les emporte
dans la nuit froide de l'oubli
Tu vois je n'ai pas oublié
la chanson que tu me chantais

C'est une chanson qui nous ressemble
Toi tu m'aimais
et je t'aimais
Nous vivions tous les deux ensemble
toi qui m'aimais
moi qui t'aimais
Mais la vie sépare ceux qui s'aiment
tout doucement
sans faire de bruit
et la mer efface sur le sable
les pas des amants désunis...

Mais la vie sépare ceux qui s'aiment
tout doucement
sans faire de bruit
et la mer efface sur le sable
les pas des amants désunis...










Les Feuilles mortes/ Autumn Leaves

Les feuilles mortes se ramassent à la pelle
les souvenirs et les regrets aussi
et le vent du nord les emporte
dans la nuit froide de l'oubli
Tu vois je n'ai pas oublié
la chanson que tu me chantais


The falling leaves drift by the window
The autumn leaves of red and gold
I see your lips, the summer kisses
The sun-burned hands I used to hold
Since you went away the days grow long
And soon I'll hear old winter's song
But I miss you most of all my darling
When autumn leaves start to fall


C'est une chanson qui nous ressemble
Toi tu m'aimais
et je t'aimais
Nous vivions tous les deux ensemble
Mais la vie sépare ceux qui s'aiment


Since you went away the days grow long
And soon I'll hear old winter's song
But I miss you most of all my darling
When autumn leaves start to fall




Have a good one dear!



 
 Reply: asokani
 member
 REF: 97726
 Date: 01/13/2008


  profile - trang ca nhan  posts - bai da dang  edit - sua bai, thay doi   post reply - goy y kien, dang bai
Dear Sinnombre,
First, I hv to say thanks coz i love these songs so much, the music so good.Thanks alot.
today is Sunday but but u are working??? What your job? this time i hv many free time coz i lost my job for 2months ago, i'll aplly for new after Tet holiday.I'm an accoutant but i dont like much, im study just bs my mom want, being a secretary or tour guide its my dream.
Since the morning im in my sis house's and feel very happy , coz long time i didnt come to visit her kid. I love baby so much, its 7pm just back from home, i wanna take bath with music then i turn on my computer n see ur reply...
What do u wanna know about me?? u can ask i'll tell u the trust, coz i think its the first step to hv good friend.
Im from Dalat city ,n i living in HCM city for 6years.
i hv some thing must to do right now, i'll write more when i hv free time ok, see u late , take care.
Hv fun tonight.


 
 Reply: sinnombre
 member
 REF: 97728
 Date: 01/13/2008


  profile - trang ca nhan  posts - bai da dang  edit - sua bai, thay doi   post reply - goy y kien, dang bai
Dear Asokani,

Just key in a few words to say hello, and to let you know that you have not been forgotten.

* I have been learning English for a little over ten years (and still learning every day).
* I am a legal drug dealer :-) (I work for a pharmaceutical company :-) I mean :) )
* I am currenly living in the United States of America.

What else do you want to know :-) ?

My dear, I have been so busy all day today. Please forgive me for this short response. I promise I will write more when I can.

Oh! I almost forget :)! You have not answered me whether or not your "love stories" are true or "make-believe" yet dear :-) .



:-) Another song for you (since you like to listen to music so much)!





Have a good one!

Catch you later eh!


 
 Reply: asokani
 member
 REF: 97729
 Date: 01/13/2008


  profile - trang ca nhan  posts - bai da dang  edit - sua bai, thay doi   post reply - goy y kien, dang bai
Good morning Sinnombre,
Its 8.30am.. you are working right?? Im so surpise about my self coz since i know you every morning im waiting your reply and feel happy with what you write , thanks to save time for me.
I must answer your Q, but first i wanna know what do you think?? Its "true" or "make - belive"?(maybe....maybe not)

Ofcouse when we are make friend i wanna know more about you to understand each other, i'll not ask Q but you can tell me any thing i'll listen to you.
I dont think that you are not living in Viet Nam, we live far away uhm..

I dont know what should i tell you now, i feel confused. If we can chat its better, we not come same time, i come and go then you come and go.. hope some day we can talk together.
i'll write more for you when i can write down what im thinking ok, its really hard to write by English but i'll try my best.
have a nice day, see you later.


 
 Reply: sinnombre
 member
 REF: 97742
 Date: 01/14/2008


  profile - trang ca nhan  posts - bai da dang  edit - sua bai, thay doi   post reply - goy y kien, dang bai
Dear Asokani,

Just key in a few words again to say good morning.

Please visit vnenglishclub.com. This is a good website where you can learn English from members who have excellent command of the English language. Please register to be a member there and send me a "private message". I will give you my E-Mail address as soon as I get your message.

Hope to talk to you soon.

HAVE A WONDERFUL DAY EH!!!






You Don't Have To Say You Love Me
(Dusty Springfield)


When I said I needed you
You said you would always stay
It wasn't me who changed but you
And now you've gone away

Don't you see
That now you've gone
And I'm left here on my own
That I have to follow you
And beg you to come home?

You don't have to say you love me
Just be close at hand
You don't have to stay forever
I will understand
Believe me, believe me
I can't help but love you
But believe me
I'll never tie you down

Left alone with just a memory
Life seems dead and so unreal
All that's left is loneliness
There's nothing left to feel

You don't have to say you love me
Just be close at hand
You don't have to stay forever
I will understand
Believe me, believe me

You don't have to say you love me
Just be close at hand
You don't have to stay forever
I will understand
Believe me, believe me, believe me



 
 Reply: chobit2512
 member
 REF: 98229
 Date: 04/06/2008


  profile - trang ca nhan  posts - bai da dang  edit - sua bai, thay doi   post reply - goy y kien, dang bai
I dont know what is love , but i think it very happy , is not it ?

 
 Reply: logic
 member
 REF: 98246
 Date: 04/08/2008


  profile - trang ca nhan  posts - bai da dang  edit - sua bai, thay doi   post reply - goy y kien, dang bai
What is Love?
Love is like water,
we can fall in it,
we can drown in it,
but we can't live without it....

Yeah, Love is so nice,
You will see ...
You will feel by your heart


 
 Reply: tinapham
 member
 REF: 98979
 Date: 11/10/2008


  profile - trang ca nhan  posts - bai da dang  edit - sua bai, thay doi   post reply - goy y kien, dang bai
hi everyone i;m tina i want to be in here your club i'm 15 years old i'm linving and studing in CAnada nice to meet u everyone ,,i hope i'll have more fun when i enjoy this club cya soon

 
 Reply: tomato009300
 member
 REF: 98990
 Date: 11/13/2008


  profile - trang ca nhan  posts - bai da dang  edit - sua bai, thay doi   post reply - goy y kien, dang bai
hello!! Welcome to this forum !! Nice to meet you !! Hope we can learn together to improve our English !!^^

 
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