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 Post by: alicenhung
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 ID 16536
 Date: 12/07/2007


mydreams
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i had sweetdream and baddream i think a lot verry much
i had a sweetheart he leave far from me he go abroad so i always dreams about him and cried i always think ourmemories he a kindman so i fall in love him verry much i want to forgot so i can't i'm really tired and sadness
i go to work all day and night i wanna cried
i'm exhauted coz healthy problems
i think i will overcome ang learn how to get up afterfalled out
i should live the better in my life


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 Reply: hatnang
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 REF: 97431
 Date: 12/12/2007


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Hello Alicenhung!!!

I hope all best wishes will eventually overcome in your life.
If you don't mind, I'd change your writing a bit...okay!

***
I've ever had sweet dreams and bad dreams, I always thought a lot about them.
I've also had a sweetheart-the person currently lives far away from me. He went abroad about a year ago. Therefore, I've often dreamed about him as each time I lay down in my bed and usually cried in loneliness. Our memorable time could not go by easily. He was so kind to me. I've loved him deeply since the day we knew each other.
But... now...the reality tells me that he doesn't belong to me and I suddenly realize he is not mine.
I've been going to work all day and night to forget everything that we used to have together. I really want to cry and shout out loudly but I cannot...
I'm exhausted because of my health problem. I think I myself will stand on my own feet and learn how to get up after this personal experience.
I should carefully consider more for my life in the future, shouldn't I?
***

LET A HAPPY SMILE STAY ON YOUR FACE since now!

( Xin lỗ nhé, vì hatnang đã sữa lại bài viết của bạn, chúc bạn luôn vui vẻ :))


 
 Reply: namthao
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 REF: 97464
 Date: 12/14/2007


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Chào chị Hatnang,
Lâu rồi mới gạp lại chị, Đạc biệt là gặp lại chi trong một chủ đề "dream".

- Có một lần minh đã nghe một người nói:

I have dreamed for this moment.

- một lần khác, tình cờ mình lại nghe một người nói cho một người:

I have seen this moment in my dream.

Có lẽ vì "dream" nên mình thật khó mà quên "dream", và theo minh nghỉ hai cách nói hoàn toàn khác biệt, tuy nhiên ý nghĩa của hai câu nói hình như là một. Dù sao cũng là suy nghi cũa cá nhân mình. tuy nhiên theo chị hai cau nầy thì như thế nào? nếu đươc nghe một người nói, thì câu nào chị thích nhứt?
Cám ơn chị, Chuc chị vui vẽ

Nam Thao


 
 Reply: hatnang
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 REF: 97482
 Date: 12/18/2007


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Hello Namthao,

Ah ha, lâu lắm rồi mới gặp lại Namthao, cám ơn vì đã có lời thăm hỏi tới hatnang.

Chủ đề về giấc mơ, rất là trưu tượng và đa nghĩa. Namthao muốn thảo luận về vấn đề gì?

I HAVE DREAMED FOR THIS MOMENT.
I HAVE SEEN THIS MOMENT IN MY DREAM.

Both of these sentences are carrying the same meaning, they actually describe about a dream happening in the reality.

When we commonly mention to dreams, we often consider to wishes; and we also mention to dreams while we are asleep or something that we want very much to happen.

But in fact, the wishes or dreams rarely become true as we fully expect. Therefore, if a dream suddenly becomes true, it is just a random that we always think of luck brought by the God. For example, someone becomes a millionaire by winning lottery, or winning any games that many kinds of people regularly attend just for fun, and seldom consider that she or he will be a winner. Other wise, someone’s dreams are gradually overcome by his or her conscious attempt and hard working.

The abstraction of dreams divides them into two main groups: real dreams and unreal dreams.

Someone is reaching a real dream with a clear purpose that he or she already tended to succeed in his or her strategy. Others are catching unreal things; perhaps, those never seem to be true as gambling, in which the percentage of success is very low.

To me, I like both sentences, because it precisely expresses my dream that I ever thought of has overcome for this moment.

Hatnang chỉ trả lời theo suy nghĩ của hatnang.
Chúc Namthao luôn vui vẻ và có nhiều bài viết hay gửi tới mọi người.

hatnang.


 
 Reply: namthao
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 REF: 97505
 Date: 12/19/2007


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Chị,
Chị khoẻ hôn? Although this meeting in this site is not real, I can tell Chị are still happy such as past days. I have left my home since I was 12 years old, and I asked myself that how many times of happiness I may have? Actually, it is hard to answer. Chị (you) know what? I strongly believed that your happiness makes the people around Chị are happy too (Xin lỗi, nịnh chị một chút :) :):)). Cám ơn Chị.
Oh! my God, Chị are great and clever also because Chị liked above statements that are the dreams come true. A fact, although we are not lucky such they are, we are still happy for the people who have their dreams come true, isn't right? (có phải hôn Chị?)
Chị nè, Chị talked all about the dreams, and never left any words for me. I don't know what I suppose to say, so I just bring up my opinion. Dreaming is a person's secret desire that may be or may be not too far away from current life. Example, Columbus who had a dream, and his dream was discovered the America, and another, Dr. Luther King "I have a dream . ." although he died before his dream came true.
Chị biết hôn? Whatever the dream may come true or not, people should live for their dreams. How do you think?

Có lẽ cũng không còn bao ngày là lễ Giáng Sinh, Điều chắc chắn tất cả mọi người điều nghỉ lễ. Chúc Chị và gia đình luôn luơn vui tươi.
Happy holiday,

Nam Thao


 
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