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 Post by: listentolearn
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 ID 14709
 Date: 03/12/2007


true love
profile - trang ca nhan  posts - bai da dang    edit -sua doi, thay doi  post reply - goy y kien
Huong Linh has a pretty smile which attracted to Long.Long's also a hotboy in this colleage.They felt in love for 1 year at Ha Noi, a strang place with them.Linh and Long both are students at the famous universities.But...the life never simple as itself.Same the love ...
A day, Huong walked for a way to the Busway.Usually,she goes the other way buttoday she wants to change usual way, usual that she has...A strange girl hold Long's back on his motor.They talked and smiled happlily.Huong's heart seem to be broken.Huong can't beathe,his heart can't see this fact.Huong loves Long so much,more than all things Huong has.the wind stops active,the life in her heart stop live...All things around herself stops active.What;s the life?It can't the pink in her soul also can't romantic as when Long and her had a happy time.what's feel flying when he kissed her? What's the hold warmly she had?All ... all of them are untruthful.Her heart's hurt.All this day,Huong did'nt come back home.She went...went alone...went anywhere where has Long, has a memories about him.Ha Noi is so dangerous and lonely or strange that Huong feels unbelieveable.To be away from home to study,Huong thinks she can't be herself without Long.Now,Long's heart's changing,how can Huong face to this life?Some leaf 's leaving...something 's leaving from her eyes...Huong smiled and whispered....I love you Long... but I can't forgive you...Love is never come true when I feel you make me cry so much .....

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 Reply: jamesngo
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 REF: 92918
 Date: 06/05/2007


  profile - trang ca nhan  posts - bai da dang  edit - sua bai, thay doi   post reply - goy y kien, dang bai
Anh văn của bạn không những đúng về ngữ pháp mà còn hay về lời văn và ý nghĩa. Chúc mừng, admin rất vui khi cho bạn điểm 9,5.

 
 Reply: englishmaster
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 REF: 92974
 Date: 06/05/2007


  profile - trang ca nhan  posts - bai da dang  edit - sua bai, thay doi   post reply - goy y kien, dang bai
A true story that u tried to write it. thanks for your post but hopefully that your more attentions to be paid in grammar and style that seems word by word!

Chúc vui!


 
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