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Forum > Luận văn tiếng Anh >> Gup em sửa lỗi bi văn ny với

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 Post by: thanhvu94
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 ID 17799
 Date: 12/10/2009


Gup em sửa lỗi bi văn ny với
profile - trang ca nhan  posts - bai da dang    edit -sua doi, thay doi  post reply - goy y kien
Do you agree or disagree with this statement ?
PEOPLE WITH SIMILAR PERSONALITIES MAKE THE BEST FRIENDS
Why and why not ? Give the reasons and explanation .

I myself dont have a lot of friends but all of my best friends always have same personalities, very few of them dont. Therefore , I absolutely agree with this statement because we can only be best friends if therere some similarities between each other.

First of all , having some similarities make me feel easy to talk together. We dont need to think about what to talk everyday, we always have things to discuss about. If we dont have same personalities , sometimes its hard to find the topic to talk or just talk about nonsense things . I think its so meaningless and thats hard to lead to best friends.

As my case , I and my friends both prefer playing badminton and studying Math . Therefore, we often gather at my house for working in group and sometimes we play badminton together . It makes us nearer and happy a lots .

Secondly, same personalities create an understanding between I and my friends . When we funny or sad about something , we can share it with them . They make me feel relieved a lots . Furthermore , when we have become understandable , its hard to get angry for a long time .

I remembered there was a time when Im feel very depressed because I always got bad marks even try hard . When seeing my sad face , they recognized something unsual . They continuously asked me and I told them all my problem . After a while , they decided to help me with my studying. Gradually , my marks improved a lots . Its because they used to be in the same situation as me , so its easy to be sympathetic . Thats the reason why I say that having same personalities create an understanding .

In a word, having friends with the same characteristics is beneficial . Theyre the most reliable moral support who pick you up when you fall down in this life .

C rất nhiều lỗi mong anh chị sửa gim . Thanks trước


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 Reply: cocsuachua
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 REF: 99869
 Date: 01/14/2010


  profile - trang ca nhan  posts - bai da dang  edit - sua bai, thay doi   post reply - goy y kien, dang bai
Do you agree or disagree with this statement ? (ok)
PEOPLE WHO HAVE GOT THE SAME PERSONALITIES BECOME THE BEST FRIENDS.
Why OR why not ? Explain.(cho nay ban da hoi 'why' rui thi ko can den 'give the reasons', lam cho cau them dai dong`) .

I have a few friends and not all of them have the same personality as me. Only the ones that get the the same way of thinking,acting and living as me are become my best friends <-- ( day phai la y cua ban ko ...neu ko phai thi minh doi cai khac).I absolutely agree with this statement because in my opinion, the best friendship only exists when we find some similarities from each other.
it seems to be likely easier to get a good chat with friends who have something the same as me.We dont need to think about what to talk everyday, we always have things to discuss about. If we dont have same personalities , sometimes its hard to find the topic to talk or just talk about nonsense things . I think its so meaningless and thats hard to lead to best friends.(doan nay mac dzu y ban minh` ko hiu cho lamnhung du sao thi ngu phap van on)<-- minh doc xong cung chang hiu sua sao cho dung y ban,nen cop lai y chang lun.
It makes us nearer and happy a lots .<-- cau nay nen sua lai la`it make us closer and we 've got a lot of fun together.
same personalities create an understanding between I and my friends <-- people get the same personality find the way to reach the other's heart easily.
When we funny or sad about something , we can share it with them<--We can share the joy or sorrow with each other.
They make me feel relieved a lots<-- cho nay ban nen dien gia~ la` when i get stuck in my life , my best friends cheer me up and give me a hand to overcome challenges as well as we always think about team player first before doing sth new.

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noi chung ban viet co y nhung dien dat ko dc tot.
ban dung cho quan bo qua cai buoc viet 1 bai essay nhe.Minh thay neu ban he thong lai ban se thay viet van ko kho dau.
1.Brainstorm(buoc nay co cung dc,ko co cung ko sai)
buoc nay ban ghi ra tat ca cai y kien quan den topic,ghi j cung dc mien sao no lien quan den topic.
2.Plan
a.introduction
b.body bao gom nhiu doan paragraphs
_ cau dau tien thuong la cau chu de topic sentence,cau nay thi lay tu introduction xuongchu ban dung lay dau xa xoi.
_cac cau con lai trien khai y de nguoi ta hiu nhiu hon,minh doc xong 1 doan paragraph ma minh thay cai tpoic sentence chua ban chi`m qua,con may cau kia noi dzu~ doi.
c.conclusion: noi len quan diem va suy nghi cua ban
3.write
4.check
cu thuc hien tu tu nhe ban....
co rj` thac mac ban pm nick minh ne` c0c0ber9xgirl


 
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