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thanhlan
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ID 16138
Date: 09/30/2007
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Advantage and disadvantage of owning a car in the city
Đó là topic mà ông thầy Writing của mình cho viết essay, mình đã viết xong 1 bài nhưng thấy nó dở wá nên các bạn có thể góp ý cho mình đc ko, mình ko biết viết làm sao cho bài essay của mình hay, các bạn có thể giúp mình ko?
góp
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pinkpearl
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REF: 96296
Date: 09/30/2007
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hi Thanh Lan
Đây là topic
''Advantage and disadvantage of owning a car in the city''
nhưng đây là tài liệu sưu tầm muốn chia sẽ với bạn
Owning a car has both advantages and disadvantages
One of the most obvious advantages of owning a car is that a car allows people to move around freely. Furthermore, there is no need to wait for a bus or a taxi, so it saves time. Moreover, owning a car is a comfortable way to travel. Especially in the winter, it can protect you from standing under the rain or in the cold. Last but not least, a car makes your life safer. You will not need to walk down a dark street to wait for a bus or take a taxi.
On the other hand, owning a car has a lot of disadvantages. First of all, owning a car can be very expensive. As well, the fuel costs a lot and a car is expensive to maintain. Although it allows people to more around freely, it is very exhausting to drive in rush hour traffics.
Truong Pham: Moreover, it causes death to many people every day. Finally, if you leave your car in the street it might get stolen.
Although owning a car has some disadvantages, it has more important advantages. Therefore, I think it is very important nowadays to own a car.
(~..~)
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Reply:
thanhlan
member
REF: 96303
Date: 10/01/2007
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Thanks pinkpearl nhiều nha.
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Reply:
pinkpearl
member
REF: 96311
Date: 10/01/2007
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hi hi hong có gì , thật ra mình chỉ có 20% trong đó thui, 80% còn lại là bạn của Pink , nhưng dù sao cũng muốn chia sẽ với bạn (~..~)
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