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 Post by: zeroman
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 Date: 07/08/2007


how i knew englishrainbow page
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this is my process to registered this forum i'm an engineer but my english was terrible . recently my work has been not very hard , so i have some free time . i was trying to stydy english to improve my english
first i plant to join in evening english class , but i had released my plant because the high school free , accidental i read one topic on tuoitre daily news about " study english yourshelf on internet " i felt why don't studying myself .
my company had many computer connecting internet so i have chose one and began search on google page , the result i have seen www.englishrainbow.com , discovery this page i felt like it and determined studying english in here
to day is about one month i joined this room . i don't know my english improving or not , i knew had many pro in this room .
i write this topic because i hope pro member read my post and judge my english to i can determine my level english

thanks for read


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 Reply: hatnang
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 REF: 94722
 Date: 07/22/2007


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Cho bạn zeroman,

I am learnnig English as you do. And my English is not good at all. I can say your English is very good and much better than me. Do you know why? Because you have just studied it for one month, that is really a short time to compare to mine. I read your writing and try all my best to correct it. I am not sure that I am right.
In your writing, you forgot using capital letters and priod marks in some sentences.
I admire you, zeroman! you are doing a good job. Keep on doing it. I learn a lot from yours.

Hy vọng c bạn no đ hon thiện bi viết ny của bạn.

This is my process to register this forum. I'm an engineer, but my English is very bad . Recently, my work has been not busy , so I have some free time . I try to study English to improve it.
Before, I planted to take an evening English class , but I had to cancel this class because the fee was too high. Accidentally, I read one topic on Tuoitre daily news about studying english yourshelf on internet. I thought that "why don't I study myself ".
My company has many computers are connected to the internet, so I have chosen one and started searching on the google. Finally, I found out www.englishrainbow.com , and begun learning at this forum. I really like it.
I have studied at this site for one month . I don't know how my English is improved. I know/recognize that there are many friends who are good at English/much better than me in here .
I post this topic, and hope that you will read it and judge my English, so that I can determine my English level.


 
 Reply: hongphong
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 REF: 95175
 Date: 08/07/2007


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A great job you have done there HatNang.

HongPhong c vi suggestion như sau.

Cu This is my process to register this forum. Nếu ni Register this forum nghĩa l đăng k forum nầy vo một nơi no đ, nhưng forum nầy đ được đăng k rồi, cho nn phải thm vo một từ no đ để biết subject l thnh vin đăng k vo forum nầy. Chẳng hạng như This is my process to register IN this forum.

Chữ Planted nghĩa l Trồng. Cu, Before, I planted phải l Before, I planned Cng một cu, chữ this class khng sai, nhưng sử dụng Article, THE, hợp hơn.

Chữ Yourshelf chắc l typo. Tuy nhin, cu ni studying yourself khng sai, nhưng chủ đề đ bị chuyển sang từ ngi thứ nhất qua ngi thứ nh. Cu đ nn viết l, about self-study. Internet l proper noun v cần Capitalize, v prepositional phrase cần c Article. Thế nn đoạn đ nn viết l, self-study on the Internet. Tại sao chữ English trong đ lại bị loại ra? Đ l v đoạn văn đ đ nhắc về việc study English lc khởi đầu rồi v khng cần thiết lập lại.

Cu, I thought that why dont I study myself. Quote cho cu nầy khng cần thiết, nhưng c cũng khng sao. Tuy nhin, Thought l past tense, cho nn dont cũng nn l past tense. Nhưng khi xử dụng didnt thay v dont th cu ni sẽ trở thnh những g đ qua. Thế nn, đy l lc xử dụng Modal. Chữ That của cu bị dư. Cu nầy nn viết lại l, I think I should study myself hoặc l I thought, why shouldnt I study myself.

Cu My company has many computers are connected to the Internet, so I have chosen one and started searching on the Google bị hai lỗi: Verb-form v Article Usage. Mnh khng nhớ ai đ post bi chỉ dẫn cch xử dụng Gerund. Đy l một trường hợp Gerund nn được xử dụng hoặc l past participial. Thứ hai, Google ở đy l improper noun v khng cần phải c article, The. Nếu chỉ đch danh Google Website th dng The, nhưng Google l một hệ thống c rất nhiều chương trnh khc nhau, nn khng thể biết được l dng Google no. Tuy nhin, Google vẫn l tn của một cng ty v cần viết Hoa. Cu văn nầy nn viết lại l, My company has many computers connecting to the Internet, so I have chosen one and started searching on Google, hoặc l My company has many computers connected to the Internet, so I have chosen one and started searching on Google.

Cu, Finally, I found out www.englishrainbow.com, and begun learning at this forum c 3 lỗi: usage of preposition, comma usage, v verb-form. Trước hết, cụm từ found out nghĩa l pht hiện ra rằng[c vấn đề g đ], nn preposition trong nầy khng cần thiết khi ni đơn giảng l tm thấy. Thứ hai l dấu comma cch ly trước co-ordinating conjunction. Đy khng phải l chuỗi ngữ [series] hoặc phải cch ly dependent v independent clause, nn khng cần comma. Sau cng l chữ begun. Begun l past participial, cn began l past tense. Therefore, cu đ nn viết l Finally, I found www.englishrainbow.com and began learning at this forum" hoặc bạn c thể giữ preposition "out" v viết "Finally, I found out about www.englishrainbow.com and began learning at this forum."

Backslash ở cu, I know/recognize lm cho cu ni trở thnh unclear. Người viết muốn ni l I know and recognize, I know or recognize, I know but recognize, I know yet recognize, hay l I know [something] recognize? Same situation với đoạn, English/much better than me in here.

Cuối cng, cu I post this topic, and hope This is another comma misusage.


 
 Reply: hatnang
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 REF: 95205
 Date: 08/08/2007


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Hello ch Phong,

Thank you for reviewing my reply.
h h...đang học việc nn khng trnh khỏi bị lỗi sai, ch đ gip hanang thấy được những chỗ đ. Hatnang c cơ hội học thm một lần nữa.
Cảm ơn ch nhiều.
OK, now I will rewrite it again. Would you like to check it agian?

This is my process to register in this forum. I'm an engineer, but my English is very bad . Recently, my work has been not busy , so I have some free time . I try to study English to improve it.
Before, I planned to take an evening English class , but I had to cancel the class because the fee was too high. Accidentally, I read one topic on Tuoitre daily news about self-study on the Internet. I thought that "why shouldn't I study myself ".
My company has many computers are connecting to the Internet, so I have chosen one and started searching on Google. Finally, I found out www.englishrainbow.com , and began learning at this forum. I really like it.
I have studied at this site for one month . I don't know how my English is improved. I recognize that there are many friends who are much better at English than I am.
I post this topic and hope that you will read it and judge my English, so that I can determine my English level.


 
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