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 Post by: zeroman
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 ID 15586
 Date: 07/05/2007


importance of english
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today studying and talking english are very important . everyday we read information from many source such as computer ,internet , new paper or relax on television (cable TV) all of most is english language . you need have skill of english to accept that information so information is life , money.......... can said that , recently the information from (thị trường chứng khong ) is hot and important too

english more importance for student . when graduation if your skill english is well , you will have ocasion working in forgein company . that is dream of many student because you will get high salary and improve your skill so fast


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 Reply: sinnombre
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 REF: 94620
 Date: 07/18/2007


  profile - trang ca nhan  posts - bai da dang  edit - sua bai, thay doi   post reply - goy y kien, dang bai
zeroman wrote:
member
ID 15586
Date: 07/05/2007
importance of english
đy l bi essay cũa mnh , cc bạn xem ri chữa sai dm nh.........thanks

today studying and talking english are very important . everyday we read information from many source such as computer ,internet , new paper or relax on television (cable TV) all of most is english language . you need have skill of english to accept that information so information is life , money.......... can said that , recently the information from (thị trường chứng khong ) is hot and important too

english more importance for student . when graduation if your skill english is well , you will have ocasion working in forgein company . that is dream of many student because you will get high salary and improve your skill so fast



Dear Zeroman,

Since you are asking for correction, I took liberty to tweak your writing a little. I hope you don't mind, but if you do I sincerely apologize. Please let me know if you do and I promise I will not correct your writing ever again.


Nowadays, English is extremely important. The World Wide Web (The Internet), Cable Television, Newspapers..etc.. Almost everything we see everyday now is in English. One needs to know English to be able to understand valuable informations that may better his/her life as well as his/ her income. The reason that I said this is because I think the Stock Market's informations recently are "hot and important".

Many students dream to work for foreign companies so that they can be well compensated as well and a chance to better their English skills, and that makes English even more important for students. Upon graduation and with a good command of the English language one will have an excellent chance to work for a foreign company. That is why I think English is EXTREMELY IMPORTANT.


 
 Reply: sinnombre
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 REF: 94675
 Date: 07/20/2007


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Dear Zeroman,

You may want to see this, too.

Good luck on your learning English!

My best wishes to you and your family, too!


 
 Reply: sinnombre
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 REF: 94704
 Date: 07/21/2007


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Dear Zeroman,

Reading my post again I caught a mistake on second line of the second paragraph (compensated as well as NOT compensated as well and). I apologize.

Here is the correct version:

Nowadays, English is extremely important. The World Wide Web (The Internet), Cable Television, Newspapers..etc.. Almost everything we see everyday now is in English. One needs to know English to be able to understand valuable informations that may better his/her life as well as his/ her income. The reason that I said this is because I think the Stock Market's informations recently are "hot and important".

Many students dream to work for foreign companies so that they can be well compensated as well as a chance to better their English skills, and that makes English even more important for students. Upon graduation and with a good command of the English language one will have an excellent chance to work for a foreign company. That is why I think English is EXTREMELY IMPORTANT.


 
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