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chemnt
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ID 15068
Date: 05/21/2007
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LET"S WRITE, DON'T WORRY IT BE WRONG!
Today, English becomes really important. We've just joined in WTO, so English is more and more neccessary.
I like English in the fisrt time I stydy it. I used to want an English teacher, but now it isn't real. I choose another job which isn't relative with English, but I also use my time to follow my dream - speak English fluently.
When I suffer on web, I really want to have a person who can help me to improve my English. Ex: show me how to write a letter, check my writting...
If you can help me, I reall thanks for your help and we can be friends together.
Reply to me soon.
I'm waiting all your reply.
góp
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Reply:
namthao
member
REF: 92015
Date: 05/21/2007
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Hi Chemnt,
After reading and criticizing your assay, I found out you have very good technical writing. First, you use "period" when you finished a sentence, and you typed a capital "letter" at the begining of a sentence. Next, you put a "comma" before "but" to connect 2 sentences together. Second, you knew how to use (work) with adjective clause, and then you use adverb clause "When" with "comma" (perfect). In my opinion, I may tell that you have strong technical writing. Unfortunately, you need some improvements about vocaburary and parts of speech. First, "English is really important". "important" is adjective, and in this case, adjective follows "to be" much better than "becomes really important". Following "becomes" had better is a "noun" or you could write: "becomes really importance".
The last sentence: "when I suffer on web, I really want . . ." in this sentence, you may write. (adverb phrase) When suffering on the web, I really want . . ."
When the dependent sentence has the same subject with independent sentence, you should omit the first subject and add "ING" to a verb.." I also remind you that article "a; an and the" should be use before noun, except some special cases.
You know English such as a sea that we have to learn step by step, and this time I just tried to discuss with you about technical writing only. I hope one day you may reach your goal.
Good luck,
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Reply:
mermaild
member
REF: 92020
Date: 05/21/2007
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Dear Chemnt,
Yes, you are right. English has become an very important language besides our native language. More importantly, English is very hard to learn especially the grammar part, and in order to become a good writer or to improve your writing you have to practice it everyday. I mean everyday. Then you go over your writing several times first to check your spelling, second to check your grammar such as sentence structure, punctuation, etc. I would love to help you..so please let me know.
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Reply:
chemnt
member
REF: 92254
Date: 05/25/2007
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Dear...!
I'm very happy to receive your replies. First, thanks for helping me.
Do you join in chat room in this websibe? I don't know why they're here? They didn't use English, only Vietnamese when they're chatting together. Why did they do that? I think they come here to study, but...
Your English is good. Thanks again.
I will try my best to study more and more.
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