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 Post by: jamesngo
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 ID 15321
 Date: 06/08/2007


A terrible story about the life of GAY
profile - trang ca nhan  posts - bai da dang    edit -sua doi, thay doi  post reply - goy y kien
I will talk to you a story,so I was also a member in that. I liked them very much. I met them on a train from DaNang to HCM city. They are American, foreigners. They're very handsome, there are 4 persons in a special room. I thought they are like rich people. I stayed in a room next to their room, and with my character, I'd like to make friends with everyone, almost foreigners.
I met them the first-time in their room. I told with them very friendly and they was also. We ate together and we were friends. I knew, there are 3 persons 26 ages and there's 1 person 25 ages. They are hospitable and talkative.
Next 2 hours, I was running to their room to meet them, and, a view I have seen. They were sucking their penises and fucking together. They were out of their clothes and full-body. They were very ... and happy. I know, when I was young, I knew I'am not normal. I'm .gay.. !
They explained, with me, and, I accepted. I played with them, sucked their penis, kissed and fucked their penises. I was happy. ( My uncle didn't know, because only 30 minutes ) Their penis very big, and their chest very good. I was very like them.
Then, they gave to me some websites adress of gay and I worte into the paper. I and them were very happy during the travel.
What are you thinking now? If want to make friends with me, OK !


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 Reply: bearvn
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 REF: 93485
 Date: 06/20/2007


  profile - trang ca nhan  posts - bai da dang  edit - sua bai, thay doi   post reply - goy y kien, dang bai
Hi jamesngo,

About you being gay: it is not a problem with me. It's your preference, and (in certain culture and in my opinion) it's normal.

About the content of your post: it is fine with me, too. But others (like your uncle as you said) may not find it appropriate. I am not the admins, but I think they may have all the rights to remove you and your posts (similar to this one) from the forum. It's better if you can write about your social activities, and we can share ours with you.

About your English in this post: Your ideas are clear. If you want to improve writing skill, I suggest:
- Read about Basic sentence structure.
- Pay attention to Tense (past, present, future)
- Build up your vocabulary:
+ Tell vs. Talk vs. Say vs. Speak
+ Person vs. People
+ Character vs. Personality
+ Together vs. Each other

Not perfect, but quite good! Keep trying!

Personal advice: Learn about safe sex if you care for your health, for your friends and for those who you love and who love you.

"Goodnight and Goodluck!" :)


 
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